Tell me which of these is more likely to move you to action?
or…
One morning, after pulling a grave yard shift Dr. Bernard was explaining a cardiac catheterization procedure to Steve Wallis, a patient, when he noticed a scaly rash on Steve’s arm. Initially, Dr. Bernard shrugged it off as eczema, but then he noticed Steve also had slightly enlarged lymph nodes.
Deciding to enter his patient’s history, and symptoms into VisualDX, within seconds Dr. Bernard narrowed the diagnosis down to two possibilities: benign eczema or T-cell lymphoma, a skin cancer whose early symptoms mimic eczema. To rule out the latter option, Dr. Bernard took a skin biopsy of Steve’s rash, sending it to a dermatologist for review. The results came back positive for T-cell lymphoma, but fortunately for Steve they caught the disease early before it spread to his internal organs.
Here’s what Dr. Bernard had to say about that particular diagnosis,Each day I make thousands, often instant decisions that affect the lives of my patients and their families. Years of formal education, and practical experience are my foundation, but I’m grateful VisualDX is there to fill in the inevitable gaps.
Call it a hunch, but I bet more people will be inclined to buy VisualDX after reading the second blurb. To help explain why, an MIT professor, Dan Ariely, says it best, we are called into action by emotions – we see a cute toddler in trouble, and our hearts go to her but numbers and statistics numb our emotions and reduce our motivation to act.
The implication for marketers is clear. The power of a riveting story is more likely to evoke visceral emotions and spur the reader to action. A captivating yarn beats hard facts any day.
Tags: copywriting, emotions

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